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Post by kaedeXrtc on Nov 15, 2007 9:07:06 GMT -5
i'm not done yet beside it's still in indonesian, and u caan't call my story a novel coz it's still just a project and only my gf knows the whole story outline
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Post by darkhunter on Nov 15, 2007 10:12:18 GMT -5
Booooo ! No Kaede x Rin! (Not even Asa x Rin!)..... We need something unused.....
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Post by lou212 on Nov 15, 2007 10:20:10 GMT -5
*sigh* oh well...
Omg...I just realized there's only one chapter left and out of the two endings, I don't know what to post. omg...omg..omg...
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Post by darkhunter on Nov 15, 2007 10:28:31 GMT -5
Ending??? Whoo!! I vote for turning this into a manga! Whoo!!!! Lol I do wonder what chnx will think about this idea
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Post by Eric on Nov 15, 2007 10:42:56 GMT -5
I already talk to Lou about this before he write this story.. lol...and besides, I'm the one who convince him to tell his perspective story xD we talked about this of making a manga but I dont know if Lou agrees..
and about a novel...WHY NOT? ^^ =)
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Post by ryuushin on Nov 15, 2007 18:07:28 GMT -5
yeah!!!!!! GPRPG manga!!!!!!! we all should help... especially with submitting sketches and stuff!!! YEAH!
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Post by lou212 on Nov 16, 2007 6:47:06 GMT -5
I decided...I will make the manga and chnx will make the novel. I already started it but not yet finished. I'll finish it during our xmas break and maybe I'll add a xmas bonus too. Anyway I promise to have an update as soon as I finish the story... ryuushin: no need to submit any sketches. Alreaqdy have them. Tnx anyway...
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Post by Eric on Nov 16, 2007 7:12:15 GMT -5
Yes...lou and I are already decided before this story started, we are also debating on what social imagination can you take on this one Can you counter that lou?
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Post by lou212 on Nov 16, 2007 7:33:13 GMT -5
WTF? Chnx I dont really understand your question so how can I counter it? And besides, my sociological imagination is not as near as our teacher's.
*ONTOPIC*
ok so basically I'll make the manga of both stories: the original and alternate although I wont say which one is already being posted here...
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Post by ryuushin on Nov 16, 2007 17:40:10 GMT -5
yeh, I think anyone with half a brain can notice which is which... besides, if you need help, you know where to find me, futaridomo
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Post by jorgebonafe on Nov 16, 2007 20:34:56 GMT -5
Wait... did you say "endings" ? I thought it was a real story ..... Confused....
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Post by lou212 on Nov 16, 2007 22:47:15 GMT -5
Its a story based from our experience so yeah....it is a real story...but with a little added touch to keep it interesting.
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Post by lou212 on Nov 17, 2007 23:05:51 GMT -5
Okay, heres the final chapter. Its quite short compared to the other so its missing out some interesting stuff...
Well anyway here it is:
PART 8 - THE LAST CHAPTER
PM
5:34
We went to the usual place we go to eat. It was a place which only served grilled dishes but they were pretty good. I was totally enjoying the food that I started eating like a pig.
5:56
After our dinner, we got back to our rooms and I started packing my things. It was quick coz I only brought a few things and left some others at home. After I packed, I was about to lock the door...then I saw her standing at her doorstep.
LOU : "Hey..." CHNX: "..."
*CLICK* (sound of door locking)
LOU : "Well, I guess this is goodbye....for now." CHNX: "Yeah..." LOU : "Well, good luck on your exam and I'm sure all your hard work will pay off. You'll pass with flying colors." CHNX: "Thanks..." LOU : "Well, gotta go now or I'll be late..." CHNX: "...bye..."
I waved a final goodbye to her as I entered the taxi. It was sad that we won't be going home together but life is just unfair. I took a final glance at the person who was waving her hand goodbye...
LOU : <"I know she'll be just fine..."> TAXI DRIVER : "Huh? Whatcha say?" LOU : "Nothing."
````````````````````````````````THE END`````````````````````````````````
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Post by Asaforever on Nov 18, 2007 3:04:15 GMT -5
This is...a bad ending...sounds like AIR!
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Post by jorgebonafe on Nov 18, 2007 7:18:58 GMT -5
Air? This sounds like Air? I have to disagree... Air was MUCH worse
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