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A story
Oct 11, 2007 14:20:44 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Oct 11, 2007 14:20:44 GMT -5
Since people are too lazy to GIVE US ONE MORE VOTE, and waiting any more will threaten me to lose the flow, we are continuing the story tomorrow, following with a update on story path: E! Cuz i vote towards that one, jeez you people, are you that lazy to read my walls of text? Don't think i am gonna reduce the size, cuz now i'm pissed!
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A story
Oct 11, 2007 14:23:37 GMT -5
Post by {Beware of the Crimson Moon} on Oct 11, 2007 14:23:37 GMT -5
Finally! Dude, u freaking should have done this a long time ago...
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Oct 11, 2007 21:39:24 GMT -5
Post by jorgebonafe on Oct 11, 2007 21:39:24 GMT -5
Is not his fault, anyone would be pissed if after working so hard making a story no one reads it. We just need more members....
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Oct 12, 2007 11:53:51 GMT -5
Post by darkhunter on Oct 12, 2007 11:53:51 GMT -5
yeah... I mean... I love the story...too bad no one bothers to vote...we really need more members...
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Oct 12, 2007 14:08:55 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Oct 12, 2007 14:08:55 GMT -5
(A)Damn I'm sleepy... but... before that... Just WHAT is that annoying sound coming from downstairs...
I decide it's better to check things out. But as i get up from the bed... some guy with a mask over his head charges into my room. He stares at me, and i can clearly see, he's QUITE scared, noticing me, he quickly runs toward me and somehow grabs me from behind, and holds me with my right hand behind my back in a immobilizing position... I'm still dazed at what's happening so i don't realize what's happening until I'm already being held like that.
(L)Come, now, mister thug, it's not polite to run away like that.she says, Luna appears in the door frame, fully dressed... there is something really wrong here...
(R)Stay away, or... or i hurt this man...
(A)Um... Luna, what's happening here?
(L)Isn't it obvious, the person here tried to break into my house and steal something...
(A)Yes, i think i realized that, but why is he in this condition?
(R)Shutup, you're a hostage here!!Yep, he's desperate
(L)It does not really matter, more importantly, what are you doing getting yourself in that predicament?
(A)What, i was half-asleep, there was nothing i could do.
(R)Hey, don't ignore me
(L)*Sigh*I guess it can't be helped, but are you really that stupid?
(T)Hey
(A)Why are you calling me stupid, i told you i was half-asleep
(R)HEY
(L)Is that really a good excuse?
(R)Listen to me!!
(A)Yes, it's a good excuse, you can't do anything right if you're half asleep
(R)STOP IGNORING ME!!!
(A;L)Shutup, you're annoying! Me and Luna both say this at the same time, and while saying this, i somehow manage to grab him with my left hand and throw him overhead on the floor right next to me, following this, Luna points down that black sword of hers... where did she pull it out?
(L)Now be a good boy and wait there while i call the police, ok?
(T)*gulp*
Something about this is fundamentally wrong... And in any case, it seems Luna has some influence in the police, since this incident went by fast, no, i mean at amazing speed, somehow... i think I'm beginning to understand why that robber was so scared of her... But, that was.... Something was bothering me, that move that i used then, i threw him overhead with just my left arm... and... i am sure i used the same move before... in a much different situation in another place at a different time...
(L)Probably, the shock caused your memory to react, that was not a move that you can do without proper training, perhaps more fighting might unblock your memories some more... i think i may have a idea...
And saying something as scary as that, she left again, i wasted the day trying to remember more, but... it was no use, i vaguely remember that... i once needed to use that move sometime before, but... where, and why... thinking about it makes my head hurt, so it's hard to remember where i even learned that move... Later that evening, she returns, and hands me some clothes...
(L)Here, get dressed, we're going to a place that may help release some more of your memories... She hands me a set of clothes... a shirt that had the upper half black, and the lower half white, split diagonally, with a yin and yang symbol on the center of the back, also the left shoulder was expose... and a pair of pants that were black too and seemed to be made so you can move easy in them... and also... a pair of bracelets, one was black, and one silver... they seemed the type of bracelets a warrior would use in his complete armor... these clothes were strange indeed, but
(A)Luna... these clothes... they seem familiar...
(L)They should, i found you dressed in them.
(A)Ah, i see...What kind of person was i to wear something like this?
It was already dark outside, Luna half dragged me across the silent streets to a back alley, there was a bridge overhead, a large one at that...
(A)Um... Luna, what are we doing over here?
(L)Waiting.
(A)For who, or what?
(L)Them. Saying this, she points to a small gang of thugs coming from the other way...
(A)L...Luna???
(T1)Are you the one that called us here?
(L)Yes
(T1)And who is this "challenger"?
(L)Him.And she points at me... yeah, i somehow knew this was going to happen.
(T1)As in the deal?
(L)Yes, if you can beat him.
(T1)Heh, you better not be pulling our leg, if you're trying to pull a prank on the "Mad Dogs" you gonna be very sorry, missy.
(A)Luna, what did you tell them?
(L)That I'll pay them if they can beat you.
(A).....................how much
(L)That is of no importance. Yes, it is of importance, it is of great importance, i want to know, no, i NEED to know for just how much did you sell my life for!
(T1)OK, boys, you know what to do.
(T2)Me first, boss.
Saying that, one of the thugs steps in front of the others, waiting for me to step up to the challenge, i really really want to run away, but...
(L)...
Something tells me it's better to die with honor than getting caught by the demon glaring at me from behind, so i step up.
Why do i have to do this? Wasting no time, the thug tries to punch me, my body moves before my mind... This is so annoying he misses completely Am i that unimportant? Next, he tries to kick me, he wastes a lot of time recovering from his wasted position from the punch he missed and now i have to fight a meaningless fight i go to his side, and without thinking, i grab him and then throw him in the wall, he doesn't get up
(A)A...aya?
I don't even know how i did that, but thinking back, didn't i do something like that before?
(T1)What the, that guy, he took out Tommy, boys get him!
This situation does seem familiar, maybe, just maybe, Luna was right? Will this unblock my memory... In that case.... just maybe, if it can help me regain my memory, than this wasn't such a bad idea after all... with my restrictions gone... they didn't even know what happened
A few minutes later, the thugs that weren't knocked out have already fled, i lay on the ground nearby...
(L)Good work, this neighborhood is gonna be safer now.
(A)... Luna... NEVER do something like this again...
(L)Well, how was it? Did you remember anything else?
(A)Not much, but i guess you were right... this does seem familiar, i dunno what kind of life i lived, but, whatever i did, it's pretty clear i learned how to fight...
(L)Indeed it seems so...
Something is wrong
(L)Well, you took care of a very dangerous gang all by yourself
The thugs all left, so...
(L)I guess i have to thank you for this
...why do i feel this...
(L)Come, let's go back
...chill...
(?)I don't think you will be leaving so fast... you still have some things to take care of
That voice... So that person came... Bastard never leaves us alone, does he?
(L)You...
Ages since the last update, well, here we go... another update at last, from yours truly, have fun, ya hear? And, today's choices are: A) a woman's voice that somehow creeps into my spine B) a man's voice that echoes his hatred
also, T1 and T2 are shortcuts for Thug 1 and Thug 2, and plus, our today special guest today is : the robber(R), everyone pay him a visit in jail! BTW, it's record size is all your fault for not voting earlier! and cuz i'm pissed next update.... who knows...
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Oct 12, 2007 14:11:23 GMT -5
Post by {Beware of the Crimson Moon} on Oct 12, 2007 14:11:23 GMT -5
Dude... That's some heavy stuff, man... I think my eyes r starting to bleed, bra...
Nice ending... I guess I'll vote later =)
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Oct 12, 2007 14:18:19 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Oct 12, 2007 14:18:19 GMT -5
The eye bleeding effect is a small price to pay for reading this... don't you think?
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Oct 14, 2007 10:16:26 GMT -5
Post by darkhunter on Oct 14, 2007 10:16:26 GMT -5
Ok...so...let me see, both choices are meaningless, so I guess I'll go with B, since there aren't many male characters so far...
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Oct 14, 2007 10:26:22 GMT -5
Post by Asaforever on Oct 14, 2007 10:26:22 GMT -5
I vote A
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Oct 14, 2007 13:35:04 GMT -5
Post by jorgebonafe on Oct 14, 2007 13:35:04 GMT -5
Hum.... I guess I'll vote A. And Phoneix, the big text isn't punishment at all... I love reading, the more, the better
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Oct 14, 2007 21:56:10 GMT -5
Post by mikep on Oct 14, 2007 21:56:10 GMT -5
i'm gonna have to vote B
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Oct 15, 2007 10:17:39 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Oct 15, 2007 10:17:39 GMT -5
OK, all i need now is eric's and beware's votes and i'll update again.... wow, i made one of the GP legends vote, i feel like so good right now....
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Oct 16, 2007 12:55:27 GMT -5
Post by {Beware of the Crimson Moon} on Oct 16, 2007 12:55:27 GMT -5
I vote... A =) It's my first time voting not C xD
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Oct 17, 2007 9:20:18 GMT -5
Post by Eric on Oct 17, 2007 9:20:18 GMT -5
I vote for A, sorry for th delay, the wall of text kills my time...
vote for A cus I'm curious about the creepy voice
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Oct 18, 2007 14:07:52 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Oct 18, 2007 14:07:52 GMT -5
On a rooftop nearby, she was gazing down on us...(L)You! What are YOU doing here? (?)Dear,oh dear, been so long since last we met and this is how you greet me? ...pain...(L)Stop joking around! What... (?)I have not come here to chat with you... dear sister My whole body hurts... my heart feels like it's about to explode... my head feels like it has long past passed that point...(A)You... here... that... means... (?)Ara? Ara? What's the problem? I thought you would be more lively than this. (A)...you...who?... I am having trouble breathing, speaking is... past my limit at this point...(?)So you really did lose your memory, such a shame, you can't even see what's before your eyes... (L)...? (A)...what?... ... it hurts...(?)So boring.... ... it hurts...(?)...maybe if i show you... ... its unbearable...(?)...some of your memory might return? (A)w...what...are...you... (?)Do you really not know? My mind...my body...(?)I am talking about her She points at Luna(?)I mean, doesn't she resemble that girl so much? ..........what?(?)If i remember right, her name was Se.... She does not complete the sentence, because the space were she was a moment ago... where my hand is pointing now... has been completely destroyed, she already had moved some place else, though....(A)That... name...never... ... a gate lay behind me... with the doors wide open...(A)you... are not... allowed.... ... another one i just passed....(A)that...name...you...must not... ...and somewhere in front of me, i can hear the chains being rattled on the third one...(A)Never say that name in front of me, I'll kill you. As my hand moves towards the sound of the chains... some one pulls me back...Don't.The sounds subsides... i pass into unconsciousnessbut...(L)A...angel? My body is still standing...Stand back, brat... this is not for the likes of you.(B)Heh... you know... i really should thank you. (?)Oh dear, already? (B)That brat finally shut up. Been a while since i had full control. I think i will grant you a quick death as a reward, Akina (Ak)You never change, do you, Beast? (B)I'm not in the mood for small talk, i may not like that brat, but at least one thing is clear, when HE says he will kill someone, that means that some one actually made him snap. He's my amplifier, i can't lose him yet. (Ak)I see... (L)... During all of this, Luna was watching from the entrance in the alley.(B)Like i said, i am not in the mood for petty talk. Tell me where he is, NOW (Ak)Hm... who knows? The space where Akina was until a moment ago distorts and everything inside it is destroyed like last time.(B)Don't even try to play games with me, i am already going to kill you, but if you continue, it will be a slow and painful death. (Ak)But... can you do it in that condition? (B)*twitch* She noticed...(Ak)Unfortunately, i cannot stay and play, i have quite a bit of things to take care of. (B)... (Ak)Well then, until later... A fine mist covers her and when the mist is gone, so is she.(B)Wait dammit My body tenses to go in pursuit, but...(B)Dammit It falls down to the ground instead...There is no point in trying... he passed second gate, and almost opened the third... you can't do anything......dammit...We can't force anything more or else...I KNOW, DAMMIT. For now... let's rest...With that... my body collapses...(L)... A small distance away, 2 figures were watching this...(??)Nee-chan, do you think he is...? (??)He probably is. (??)What do we do? (??)Let's wait for now, that woman is still there too. (??)Do you think we can find him, nee-chan? (??)Yes, we will. ...what happened...?I open my eyes slowly... there was a shape in front of me...OK, new update, not much to say, today's choices are... A)Someone's shape... it's just like... me??? B)A small shape... a child... with... silver hair??? C)A girl with orange short hair... is this a park? D)It's very dark, but i think i see... 2 shapes, of small stature...
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