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A story
Sept 30, 2007 11:12:16 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Sept 30, 2007 11:12:16 GMT -5
hi-so girl? What do you mean?
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A story
Sept 30, 2007 11:18:49 GMT -5
Post by darkhunter on Sept 30, 2007 11:18:49 GMT -5
well, rich ppl are very hi-so (they think too highly of themselves sry if I offended anyone here...)
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A story
Sept 30, 2007 13:36:05 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Sept 30, 2007 13:36:05 GMT -5
As i come to and look around, i realize this is a very high-class kind of room... i try to stand up but...(A)Hey, what... I'm bound to the bed with leather straps(A)... God, i wish i could see my own face right now! I hear footsteps from across the door, someone is approaching the room, think fast!If i can relax my wrist enough then i can...And my hands slips from the leather strap, no time to think about where i know this trick, as i quickly undo the other straps, but... the footsteps are already at the door, and the one who opens it is a girl, she looks kinda strange, high class dark clothing and for some unknown reason.... a dark sword that goes with the clothes
note to self: if this is what you call a rich goth girl, then make the world a better place, i can't speak(L)Oh you're awake i see, and for good this time, it seems... (A)Yes, i... uh... had quite a good sleep... (L)Then if you're feeling up to it, i would like to start questioning you... (A)Questioning? (L)Yes, i found you half-dead in a alley behind my house, how did you end up in that place? (A)Uh... i... (L)Let's start with some easier questions, then... She didn't even give me time to think, her voice still is pretty much calm and i can't detect any emotion in them(L)Well then, what's your name? (A)My... name... (L)Yes, that other people use to call you, that's what a name is! (A)My... name is.... i... don't remember.... (L)What? Do you remember anything else, then? (A)Not much... only a couple of fragments here and there... (L)*sigh* She puts her hand on her head(L)Just my luck, not only do i find a strange injured man near my door, but he also has amnesia too, so bothersome. Even as she says this, her voice and expression still don't betray her feelings.(A)Um... can you put that sword away, it's making me nervous... (L)No, i will not, not only were you armed when i found you but you also somehow managed to free yourself from the restrains i set up! (A)Yea, about that, what was up with those? (L)What, like i said, you were armed when i found you and also, you kept struggling while you were unconscious so... Just for that reason? What the hell did i get myself into?(A)Um.. i do not understand the situation but it seems you saved me, i thank you for that. (L)Thank me when you will leave this place, your wounds are not fully healed yet, you should just rest today, i will return later! Saying so, she leaves the room, leaving me in a little shock...Wow, she's... differentSeveral hours pass, with nothing happening, it looks like i can go out by the window, using a nearby tree, i am feeling fine, and i want to know more about what happened, so why don't i take a short walk? i can see a park nearby, and a long road leading somewhere... into town? It seems like she left me what seems to be my clothes on a chair nearby...OWOWOWOWOW, my fingers hurt, long post, this time, seen longer, but this is my longest post yet, so today's choices are : A) go into the park B) check out the large road C) check out the back alley for a little while D) no, better stay here like she told you We will show the characters appearance tomorrow, so if you have suggestions, make them now!Sorry for the modifications Phoenix, I just want to show the image, not link it -EricOK, from now on, remember, A means that the main character talks, and L is for the Unknown girl right now, from now on people will be notified about these kinda changes, things are gonna be explained more at next update -Phoenix
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A story
Sept 30, 2007 23:18:07 GMT -5
Post by jorgebonafe on Sept 30, 2007 23:18:07 GMT -5
B) check out the large road
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Post by {Beware of the Crimson Moon} on Oct 1, 2007 7:02:01 GMT -5
C) C'mon ppl... Wouldn't u wanna check out the place where u almost got killed? xD
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Post by Aurica Nestmile on Oct 1, 2007 7:28:00 GMT -5
D... Just listen to that girl...
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Post by darkhunter on Oct 1, 2007 9:45:50 GMT -5
I agree with beware....C
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A story
Oct 1, 2007 10:43:35 GMT -5
Post by Eric on Oct 1, 2007 10:43:35 GMT -5
Bleh, I wanna listen to that girl and besides its early to know the truth about the hero
So its D, besides she's cute
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A story
Oct 1, 2007 10:44:32 GMT -5
Post by darkhunter on Oct 1, 2007 10:44:32 GMT -5
ok...so what do you vote for then???
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A story
Oct 1, 2007 10:48:57 GMT -5
Post by Eric on Oct 1, 2007 10:48:57 GMT -5
D of course, besides if he stays, he might saw another girl like when that girl's sister or something like that..
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A story
Oct 1, 2007 10:50:40 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Oct 1, 2007 10:50:40 GMT -5
Poor poor poor Eric... if you only knew
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A story
Oct 1, 2007 11:55:02 GMT -5
Post by darkhunter on Oct 1, 2007 11:55:02 GMT -5
Um, eric, a girl with a sword (unsheated).... do you really want to sick around and find out how many ways she can stab that through you?
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A story
Oct 1, 2007 13:32:48 GMT -5
Post by {Beware of the Crimson Moon} on Oct 1, 2007 13:32:48 GMT -5
The day is almost over, I think I will walk around the town alittle. I am happy that I have some time off, even if it is rare. Walking around the town sure is relaxing even if some people do seem to look strangely at me. I of course am not wearing the usual clothing I ware at the mansion. I think my clothing is rather simple, but it seems the people around me disagree.. Oh well, I should not worry about that now.
And thinking so, the girl with silver hair, Luna Cristopher of Einzbern, continues to walk the streets. She chose to go to a pet shop, she always did like little animals. Fashion never interested her, always she would only care for the simple things of nature.
When dusk came she decided it was time to head back. When she reached the alley way behind her mansion, it was already dark.
Dark already? When you think about it, this does happen to me often. But this alley way has always been behind the mansion, but I never even tried to go inside. Not that it would be interesting, but still... And I am late.. I think this would be faster, than going around.
And then she suddenly heard a thud. It was a soft sound.
She frowns.
Well I can't just go back to the mansion as if I heard nothing, so...
And she enters the alley.
Strangely cold. - she thought and saw something lying on the ground. It was a dark figure and in one of it's hands was a black sword.
Black.. Sword..
She came near the dark figure and examined it. It was the body of a boy. He was wearing shirt with black and white, the yin and yang simbol on it's back split the shirt into sides of black and white. Black pants. A pendant and 2 bracelets - silver and black.
She crouched down to look for the boy's vital signs, but when she touched him, she suddenly jumped back.. She felt a chill run through her body. And along with the chill came another feeling... It was a feeling of horror...
Wha, what the...?
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A story
Oct 1, 2007 14:13:23 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix on Oct 1, 2007 14:13:23 GMT -5
(A)She said she found me in a alley behind the house right? Maybe there's still something there, something to help me remember
I get dressed. As i use the tree by the window to climb down, i then veer to what seems to be the front of the building, no before that... Ok... now this is new, or at least, new to me... The outside of the building looks just like a normal house, but the inside is fit for a castle.... i shake this feeling that i somehow expected to come, and i circle around the building, and i find a nice little alleyway, a small secluded one and sure enough, there's a blood stain there... So this is where she... I kneel down beside the spot, yes, this does seem familiar, somehow... And yet, i remember nothing, there's nothing here to give me a clue of what happened or who i am... this pisses me off! Exactly what does? The fact that you cannot find any clues to who you are, or the fact that you actually came so close to dying in such a insignificant way? Both, i want to know what happened! And then what? You just gonna return to your old life? I first have to remember WHAT that life was... So you get your memories back, what's the first thing you're gonna do? I don't know Revenge? Revenge? Revenge! Why REVENGE!!! WHY? Because he did that to us... And he must be punished, no? He should not just get away after what he did... What... he... did... Several images flash into my mind, a burning town, a blood soaked hill, with only one tree on it, a valley of corpses... why, why am i remembering these things now? And why am i not even bothered one bit about them? I end the dialog with myself and figure i should return to my room... strangely enough, i don't find it weird that i just had a talk with someone who's not there... (L)Ah, i see you're feeling better, if you're playing around in the streets. I bearly know her but that voice somehow freezes me in place... (A)I just wanted to see if i remember anything... (L)Well, did you? (A) I'm afraid not... (L)In that case, come back inside, the sun is setting and it will get cold! (A)Yes As i pass through the front entrance, i am once again shocked about the differences between inside and outside... (L)Well, you said you have some pictures into your memory, right? (A)Yes... (L)Is there absolutely nothing that can be used to identify yourself? (A)Not really, there isn't any sound that i can actually understand... All i remember is... a fire somewhere, a la-like room, and something somewhere with the letters A.N.G.E.L. written on it... I decide to hold the really traumatic images to myself. (L)Hm... that indeed is troublesome... true there isn't anything we can use in those memories... (A)Um... i don't want to sound ungrateful or rude, but i have already stayed here 2 nights, um... what's your name? (L)Luna Christopher of Einzberg. You may call me Luna, so, what about you, what should we do about your name, it would be troublesome to just call you "hey", rude too, among other things... (A)Um... i don't really have any idea, you may call me as you wish... (L)Very well, you said you remembered a "something" with the letters A.N.G.E.L on it, right? In that case, until you remember your own name, i shall call you Angel. (A)Angel? Sounds weird for a guy's name... (L)Oh? do you have some sort of objection? (A)No, i just thought it sounded a bit weird... (L)Then it's settled. Since i got myself entrapped in this for some unknown reason, I'll help you until your memory returns... (A)Rea... Really? Um.. thank you... this is kinda surprising... thank you, really, thank you (L)Like i said, thank me when this is over. And so, something weird happened, i am found almost dead in an alley and a rich girl saves me, not only that, but she also is willing to help me until i regain my memory... Things are quite complicated i think as i go to sleep. So we have somewhere to rest, eh? And even someone to hide us too, quite the lucker, aren't ya? Baka, you're a part of me so we're both lucky No, if we wouldn't have found some place like this i would have taken control over your body and by now we would be resting in someone's corpse. I fall asleep (L)Listen, today i will be busy with some family issues, so stay here and wait for me, we will find a way to bring your memory back one way or another. (A)OK... And she leaves again, really, who would trust some one as much as her, and in such short time, too... Well, just wasting this time would be a waste so..
I am seriously needing new fingers here... sheesh, ok, as you can see when someone is speaking, there will be a initial at the beginning of what he says, our main character is, in case you didn't realize, Angel, no more info available at the time, as you can see, Beware will help me with side story's, so watch out for those!! Today's choices are: A)I never got to see where that crowded road leads to... B)That park looks greener than ever C)No, she may get mad if i don't listen to her again So, today's choices are for another character too, after this, the other 2 will be "Forced" into the story line, holy crap, i write so much, and we haven't even introduced all the characters yet... And another thing, we will use from time to time Japanese words, for example is today's "Baka" which means idiot, fool or something similar, new words will be explained at the end of the post.
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Post by {Beware of the Crimson Moon} on Oct 2, 2007 7:23:15 GMT -5
C =)
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